Showing posts with label chapter 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label chapter 2. Show all posts

Thursday, March 18, 2010

How was it?

I wanted to thank everybody for the nice comments! Here and in other places around the web.

You might have noticed by now that there are a lot of references to the Mediterranean culture, the food, the language, the sayings and the gestures (somebody noticed the initial Italian proverb on page 1 and giggled like crazy: yes, the dot of a letter "i" is also known as fly poop, but I cannot use that as it is not accessible to most readers - and definitely saying tittle is not as funny and I would spend hours writing post to explain what a tittle is and that tittle is not tits and so on XD - know thy trolls - and also would not convey the image of a world so far away in time and a land so tiny that it's just a tiny dot on a piece of paper).

I would like to comment back, some of you may already have read what I am about to say so... if you are a member of Muppy, you don't have to read!

To Shara, who was happy to see some... flesh: let's get rid of a myth... sailors don't go around all dressed and in perfect order! :gnegne:
We shall leave that privilege to Hollywood. We shall see many members of Kane's crew, cute or ugly, go around shirtless and barefoot: 1) the climate in the Mediterranean area is very mild 2) the story is set in summer so it's hot 3) we're on a ship, under the sun. 4) you can't climb up any rigging if you are all dressed like a scarecrow (no jacket, no vest, no frilly frills).
Sailors have always gone around half naked, on their ships, life was hard enough and having to care about clothes would be too much. They are baked by the sun, have rough and callous hands, suffer from diarrhea and other little problems (which we will see, I promise).
Usually a dress code was required for officers... but these are all guys who escaped from the military and merchantile marine. Plus Kane is not interested in any forms.. except for grammar.:gnegne:

Also sailor are very good seamstress!

Juny: yes, some pirates have no teeth due to scruvy.

Trust our doctor, he has developed a solution to this problem. As Kane previously said: fruit is a luxury when you live on the sea. God knows... Wilson Kane loves fruits. So he asks to stop around the island often to get some fresh fruits. Our doctor's solution, though, will be: lemonade!

Shara again mentioned the smell: yes, water was for drinking and sometimes not even for that! Hahahahaha. But keeping water very long could be dangerous.
Kane asks to stop on islands often to get fresh water too... but being dirty and smelly can also be source of typhus and prostatic problems.
That is why the doctor suggested the crew should bathe once a month... and the reward will be sweet. Usually the bath/reward falls on the first wednesday of the month.

After considering water and vitamins let's think about calcium too. You have to know that Cat loves cheese very much. One of Kane's favorite prey is a guy called Sliced Hamm he is a merchant of salame and cheese.

Breed who says she has problems with the twins and their names: this is normal, right now, and I swear I'll make your life harder in chapter 4! LOL. With time, though, it will be easier to distinguish them.
Cassiopea will probably not be loved very much. I love her though, she has strong principles and she is there to say: when a woman says no, she means no!

Kane's final speech lets you understand a bit about him. We'll get to know more about his take on life soon. What I can tell you right now is... that Wilson Kane is the type of guy who would not give you a fish, if you were hungry, but he would give you the fishing tools.

Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Chapter 2 is Out!

Here is chapter 2 on Issuu... for all the fans of the flash/flipping page feature!

Happy St. Patrick's day!

Chapter 2 is out!

Here we go! We can reset the countdown!

http://thepiratebalthasar.smackjeeves.com/


I have decided to upload chapter 2 today, anticipating the deadline!
This is due to the fact that I have taken an important decision: Why should you wait?

This chapter will have 32 pages instead of the 45 announced.
In fact when I came to render this chapter I realized that page 32 had a nice denuement and was a good chapter closure. Also... the following pages feel more of a better intro for chapter 3, which will be called: First Night!

From now on we are done with the intro and the story becomes a sort of... weird slice of life, using pirates as a pretext to create romantic comedy, with some adventure here and there, of course.
The story will still be divided in chapters - which are more to be considered as "the theme of the day" - but I will upload pages more often so you don't have to be a slave of the countdown up there, which is a source of stress for me as well hahahahaha.
This way, as soon as I have a little scene ready, I will upload it and announce it here and on facebook!
So you better keep an eye on the blog!

Go read now! Well, not now... Smackjeeves has a clock and uploads files every 5 minutes... give it some time!

The Italian chapter will be up this evening and will be posted here, using issuu as a support, but with better size an resolution.

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Coming up!

Is Cat an ogre?
Does he eat girls?

Apparently that's what Feetsie believes... and she is not the only one who's scared of him.

Why, do you think, is Cat so scary? Any guesses?

Sunday, March 14, 2010

Yohoooo!

Don't miff chaptev two!
I'll be fooooo chavming!

You'll love me and my new love ftovy if about to begin!
I am fuch a lovev!!!!

Tic tac 4!

6 days to go! Anf Anf!


Lettered pages: 22

Rendered pages: 22

Edited pages: 45

Cleaned up pages: 45

Total pages: 45



Saturday, March 13, 2010

Chapter 2 - cover

Surprise!!! 7 days to go and here's the cover for you!

Yes, yes, that's the title: How to get married! - the pirate way -

Precisely, somebody is getting married in this chapter! And let me tell you more...: a love ends and a new engagement begins, an official one!

So somebody gets married, somebody gets engaged, somebody gets kissed, somebody gets kissed (yes, twice!), somebody falls... in love, somebody's dream comes true and somebody's nightmare comes true!
Are you curious yet?

Friday, March 12, 2010

Tic tac 3!

The countdown continues...
As I said I don't use the typical system to make this comic... I use more of an animation system. I do storyboard, pencil drawing, then put a new sheet of paper on the old one and do clean up. That's what I scan in the computer, edit them (put them on the pages) and render... which means I add the color to the pencil and do the sepia shading and the white lighting. In the end I add the balloons with the all the lettering.

I have calculated that if I manage to render e letter 4 pages per day I'll be on time.

Here's the numbers so far.


Lettered pages: 10

Rendered pages: 17

Edited pages: 45

Cleaned up pages: 45

Total pages: 45


As you can see by the number I am done with clean up and editing and am currently rendering and lettering what I have.

Thursday, March 11, 2010

Tic tac 2!

I worked till 2.a.m. last night.
How are we doing today?

Still:

Pages lettered: 10
Pages rendered: 10
Pages edited: 35
Pages cleaned: 41
Totale pages 45.


4 more pages to clean up. 10 more pages to edit. Still 35 pages to render and letter!

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Tic Tac

Time is running out!
How are we doing?
Well... here we go:

Lettered pages: 10
Rendered pages: 10
Edited pages: 24
Cleaned up pages: 35
Total pages: 45

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So I have to clean up 10 more pages. Edit about 20 of them. Render and letter 35 of them!
And time is running out!

Monday, March 08, 2010

Happy Women's day.... present!

Here's a little preview for you on women's day!

And let's all thank the school I teach at, today, which provided me with paper since I have none left to continue my clean ups!
Of course the school knows nothing of this sponsorship but, what can I say... they told me I would not be paid for extra curricular work and post finals... and I really needed paper! So... since I've been cut a couple of hundreds... I don't think they'd miss 45 sheets of paper, that are worth way less!
Also, since they believe in art, they'd be glad to know this paper will be part of the Pirate Balthasar! Right? :D

Enjoy! 12 days left and I still have work to do!

Monday, February 22, 2010

Clean up in process

Here we go, I have started the clean up of the drawings...
what? That's not how you do it in comics? Oh, I know.... but actually I don't have a clue on how to make a comic so I do it the animator way.
That's animation paper there (no, I don't have a peg bar because that paper was cut ^^" thinking I would never use it for cleaning up drawings ^^") and my hand made light table.
That's right, I had to build my own light table hahahaha. It's not very bright and I don't know if I was lucky with the sort of light I picked but it works nicely to me, it's not too strong and helps me focus on one area at the time.
This is the process that was missing in the previous chapter... that actually had my bluepencil drawings cleaned up in photoshop (and it took for ever and didn't even come out right).
Hopefuly this time around you'll see some nice and clean linework!

Sunday, February 21, 2010

Getting there...

It's almost midnight... and I've finally finished my blue pencil pages.
I have to get some better paper though, this one's too thin and rough!
So tomorrow I'll start on the clean up... my light table will be happy about it!

I'll have to do some backgrounds on separate paper too, just to make sure I am consistent.

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Storyboards!

As you can see from the pictures... the storyboard are ready.
I have started doing some larger sketches too.
It looks like chapter 2 will have 45 pages as well, so let's keep the finger crossed I won't have heavy duty works to do this month and I manage to finish everything in 32 days.

The chapter ends with a cliffhanger... maybe do we get to see Wilson Kane without his mask on?


Evviva!
Da quello che si intuisce dalle foto... ho finito gli storyboard.
Ho iniziato a fare anche alcuni schizzi preliminari per le pagine, che saranno 45, come per il primo capitolo!
Speriamo di non ricevere lavori pesanti questo mese, così da poter finire tutto entro in 32 giorni a disposizione.

Il capitolo si chiuderà con un bel cliffhanger, questa volta... forse riusciamo a vedere Wilson Kane senza maschera?