Murder in Bologna tests

After applying the style to the base concept still, I realized it looks good on white background but in a comic it looks sort of messy and muddy.
So I thought I'd try a different style and I tested it first on the secondary characters.

There are a lot of secondary characters in Murder in Bologna, maybe because it's a murder mystery.

 Eventually when you  apply the cleaner style to the concept style the image looks less messy.
What do you think?

Murder in Bologna

I am testing the style for Murder in Bologna, I am trying to go for a simil-realistic (but not too realistic, everybody can do realistic hahaha) style for it, I have not started on the backgrounds yet, I am still collecting references.

The New Family tree

Here the new family tree as per your request.

I took the old one and modified it by adding the characters we know in color as we see them in the comic (this should come as a visual aid).
As you may see the only differences are the addition of Pandora and shifting Kane up one generation. :)