tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32042844.post5141180331433581260..comments2023-04-27T10:19:29.962+02:00Comments on The Pirate Balthasar: Release in a few hours!Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32042844.post-17963783184080255652011-01-06T15:45:49.856+01:002011-01-06T15:45:49.856+01:00Check out the new version. I spent the whole night...Check out the new version. I spent the whole night fixing chapter 9 - I still think the dream is crowded.<br /><br />Pea is the last one to return on board... the thing was clearer in the Italian version so I had to rephrase the English version tonight.dedasaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08118053216478451902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32042844.post-18884439684964174082011-01-06T15:01:06.677+01:002011-01-06T15:01:06.677+01:00Pea had arrived just after the exercises, though a...Pea had arrived just after the exercises, though and wasn't Foxy still on the ship with Lio then?Thaliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10470299946567868434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32042844.post-24051135673395774982011-01-06T13:36:12.560+01:002011-01-06T13:36:12.560+01:00As I said it wasn't you.
Somebody just wrote a...As I said it wasn't you.<br />Somebody just wrote a bitchy comment on Smack Jeeves because I uploaded the Italian page and I was tempted to just postpone the release altogether.<br /><br />The whole pee/Kane-Pifo-Wes episode is right after Kane wakes up and splashes himself... before Cat meets Callista on deck, after Cassandra looks in the doctor's diary... before the morning Gym.<br /><br />It's placed like that so that when you re-read the chapter the second time you see the pages in a different way. Particularly when it comes to the gym episode... if you re-read it Pifo's "definitely" has a different meaning.<br /><br />If I were to put indication "a few hours before, a few minutes later, at the same time" it would become redundant and would also not make more sense. So because he is in a trance all night and then you see the ship awakening and you know that the whole chapter jumped back and forth... instead of spoon-feeding you I am trying your memory to see if you (the readers) paid attention and can peace the thing together just by some simple details: Lio and foxy on different ship, Cat not dressed, Kane already splashed, the doc still in Hell... Pifo still in trance... WHY? Then during the gym you go: oooh they kissed... oooh and Pifo now know who Amil is XDDdedasaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08118053216478451902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32042844.post-65800576003479045312011-01-06T13:25:54.270+01:002011-01-06T13:25:54.270+01:00Sorry if we're very impatient... I feel eager ...Sorry if we're very impatient... I feel eager for it anyway, especially when it's a page a day now... it was certainly worth the wait...<br />I also wanted to point out that there was a bit of a retcon between Pifo leading the exercises, then going back into the corn trance later that morning... could you explain that?Thaliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10470299946567868434noreply@blogger.com